2 best Haikus

the worm, lips to hold
sparkling grape’s slimy circle,
shape of reptile’s food.
-Ravi Shankar

 I like this haiku poem because it really guves good deatil.  The detail makes the poem very interesting and joyful. The details and words make the poem good.  This poem makes sense too.

 
The light of a candle
               is transferred to another candle—
               spring twilight.
-Yosa Busa
This is really deep about the candle.  This really brings joy to the poem itself.  How the light is going to other candles lights and spreads which create a twilight.  Reapeating candle is interesting and I like that about this poem.

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